Super Metroid Fiction

[CyclopsCaveman]

Loosely based on Super Metroid. Here's the introduction. ;)

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Samus landed on the loading dock to Ceres Station, sighing heavily. "What do those scientists want now?" She wondered as she took the elevator down into the space colony.

Ceres Station was built by the Galactic Federation to house scientists researching metroids. The scientists had worked for many years to produce results on metroids captured by Federation Soldiers, but they still could not produce any work. Samus had been called in by the scientists to check out their latest breakthrough.

"I wonder what they found out this time. Maybe they figured out how to make Metroid Jelly." Samus said aloud as she walked slowly down the corridors, straight toward the main lab. As she went to open the door, a sign flashed up on it. "BLUE KEYCARD REQUIRED," it said. Samus again sighed, and went through the door to the scientists' quarters. Maybe someone in there would have the keycard. She walked into the door, and as it closed, she her a loud roaring from outside the station. She knew that roar well.

Ridley!

She ran towards the scientists' quarters, hoping to catch him before anyone was killed, as she entered the ruined corridor, she froze, looking at the bodies scattered across the floor.

"Dammit!" She said as she searched the bodies of the nearby scientists, picking up clearance keycards along the way. "Ridley you motherfraker, if you think you have me cornered now..." She rushed back towards the research room. Since Ceres was a circular colony, and the research room was closer from where she was, she continued down the hall, running straight into the room.

In it was a small metroid incased in a capsule.

"This is what the scientists wanted to show me? A fraking baby metroid that I brought to them myself?!" Samus screamed in frustration. Watching the capsule, however, something appeared different.

Ridley began to come out from cloaking. "Oh, shit, so he's after that. Well, okey-frakin'-dokey." She began to fire at him, she had removed all of her equipment before she had started the mission, and her shots did little effect. "I am a short-sighted bitch," she said as she was thrown to the ground by a vicious clawed attack by Ridley.

Her suit alerted her as Ridley flew away, "WARNING
COLONY DESTRUCTION IN 00:01:30:00
EVACUATE IMMEDIATELY."

"Son of a bitch!" Samus said as she dashed her way through the corridors of Ceres Station, getting to the elevator just before the colony exploded.

THE LAST METROID IS IN CAPTIVITY.

THE GALAXY IS AT WAR.

"I first battled the metroids on planet Zebes. It was there that I foiled the plans of the Space Pirate leader Mother Brain to use the creatures to attack galactic civilization.

I next fought the metroids on their homeworld, SR388. I completely eradicated them except for a larva, which after hatching followed me like a confused child. I personally delivered it to the Galactic Research Station at Ceres so Scientists could study its energy producing qualities. The scientists' findings were astounding! They discovered that the powers of the metroid might be harnessed for the good of civilization! I left the station to seek a new bounty to hunt, but only a few weeks later, I was called back to Ceres, where I was witness to an attack by Ridley for the metroid larva. I had hardly gone beyond the asteroid belt when I received a transmission from the Galactic Federation. Ridley was spotted heading towards Planet Zebes!"

CyclopsCaveman presents:

METROID: CAPTIVITY

[Zhs2]

Bwahahahaha. I loved it. Nice to know we have other writers hanging around here :)

Apparently "incased" is an actual word. I always thought it was "encased." o_O

THE LAST METROID IS IN CAPTIVITY.

THE GALAXY IS AT WAR.

Technically, only Samus is at war... ;P

[personitis]

Hmmm, not bad writing. Better than some others out there. My only complaint is on the swearing. Tone it down some, it becomes a distraction to the story (doesn't seem to have purpose) and even if you were to use them, the scene isn't built tense enough.

Friendly critique however my friend, take no offense, only suggestion. =)