Super Metroid: The Next Dawn

[pomtt]

hi im posting a new project ive staeted ill be posting updates every thursday
the plot:

samus is on her way down to the planet octon VIII to investigate the missing colony that once thrived on the planet.

screenshots

[Sunbeam]

Looks like only one screenshot to me :razz:
Strongly reminds me of the standard SM landing site. But there's a funny pattern in the rocks above the right door. :^_^:

[Quietus]

I'll say my usual: BTS.  You don't need the square block behind a ramp when the ramp is against a wall. :^_^:

[Quote58]

Speaking of BTS, you have a lot of slopes to fix.
and more screenshots would be welcome.

[pomtt]

Speaking of BTS, you have a lot of slopes to fix.
and more screenshots would be welcome.

ok can you please point out the flaws so i can fix them and also i have only done 1 room at the min :neutral:

[Quote58]

So good news, turns out your slopes should work. I always added a square under the slope and on the outgoing block, but I see now that it isn't necessary. The photo shows what I'm talking about, yours on the left, mine on the right. They both work.

Sorry about that. Don't know why I always thought that.

[Quietus]

Shadow: Yes, his slopes are fine, and no, you do not need those blocks below your ramps. :^_^:

pomtt: You'll see what I mean below.  Where you have a ramp next to a wall, you do not need the square box behind it (inside the wall).  I've highlighted them with yellow dots:
[spoiler][/spoiler]

You may also want to remember that in big, open spaces, where it is likely that players will be able to charge a shinespark, you may wish to place TWO blocks behind the ramps on slopes, as the player can occasionally spark into a ramp with ONE block behind it, and get stuck.

[Qactis]

As Quietus mentioned, the slopes on the right would require a square bts under each sloped bts in order for Samus to be able to successfully horizontally shinespark up the ramp without hitting it and stopping

[Quietus]

Huh? :O_o:

I meant at the top of each ramp, so you have your ramp BTS going up, followed by two square blocks at the top of the ramp, like this:
[spoiler][/spoiler]

Are you saying hackers should also place them below?

[Quote58]

I was wondering that too, as when I tried the slopes the way on the right, I could shinespark up just fine.
The only problem I found was the one quietus mentioned.

[pomtt]

ok thanks for the help alot more rooms are done but you will see the on thursday

[Qactis]

Huh? :O_o:

I meant at the top of each ramp, so you have your ramp BTS going up, followed by two square blocks at the top of the ramp, like this:
[spoiler][/spoiler]

Are you saying hackers should also place them below?

oops sorry that;'s what I meant

[pomtt]

hi i have done more rooms but i can only upload them on thursday because thas when im at colage

[pomtt]

hi its thursday meening update :yay:
heer are some screeneis

[Quietus]

BTS errors abound! :heheh:

[pomtt]

 :grin: yay i fanaly passed the bts test. any way is there any faults with any of the rooms.if there is please tell me

[Quote58]

passed? abound means 'in large quantity'
Rooms aren't all that bad, but they feel much too straight and clean cut.

[Zero One]

Personally, I find the rooms are a bit too empty - it needs more stuff going on in there. Also, don't forget to use filler tiles to break up that bland green rock face!